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Sunday, March 11, 2012

The double - double cross [FGC #5]

D: "is that the 3rd left?"
they hear sirens.
"that was too easy" M said as cops cuffed D.

At M's home
STILL-SOB-COCKING-SHRIEK-BANG-SILENCE



count: 140 characters (including line breaks and spaces)



This is my first attempt at twit-fic. I don't know if I did it justice but anyway.
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8 comments:

  1. Adam BMarch 11, 2012 at 9:02 AM

    Congrats on your first attempt. A good exploration of the narrative and in the formatting to give it another perspective.
    Adam B @revhappiness

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  2. Storm DwellerMarch 11, 2012 at 12:20 PM

    You did well!

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  3. Kate SherrodMarch 11, 2012 at 1:00 PM

    I like the last line even though I'm really not sure what it's saying. This was really tense and vivid!

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    1. UnknownMarch 11, 2012 at 1:27 PM

      While he thought D was captured. His wife was shot when they received confirmation M was the spy.
      And thanks again for the feedback

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  4. UnknownMarch 11, 2012 at 1:25 PM

    Thanks all for the feedback.

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  5. UnknownMarch 11, 2012 at 5:16 PM

    Some strong imagery from this one.. welcome!!

    Great to see you here - I've entered this fun challenge too.. http://annieevett.blogspot.com.au/2012/03/starved-fgc-2012-5.html

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  6. Welshman PaulMarch 12, 2012 at 3:23 PM

    Interesting and evocative.

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  7. Barbara @ de rebusMarch 13, 2012 at 8:13 PM

    Very interesting storyline you've developed - with the limited space. Well done on a first attempt!

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